My demons are smart
They attack real slow
Their strike though is precise
I feel every single blow
You are worthless, one whispers
You have duties, the other reminds
You just talk, the third blames
While another closes all blinds
Nothing matters, nothing’s safe
No one’s a friend, you’re a disgrace
They keep up in rhythmic succession
Until I’m totally defaced
Then comes the cruelest of all
My subconscious that I keep strong
That now has only hate
For me and my choices wrong
It slowly deteriorates my will
That I built with lots of effort
Ultimately nothing’s left
But a big pile of rubble
Now its upto me
whether to let it be
Or start anew my fight
Against my demons’ spite
No matter how strong a person’s will is, there comes a time when his demons catch up with him. That is the time when we must remember that we are not the only ones facing this. And that realization should give us strength to move forward again.
Catching the exact dilemma we face, you did great work here. I particularly like the part where the demons try to lead your mind, each of them with their own vile wishes.
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Thanks a ton! We all have our bad days, there’s no shame in admitting it.
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Yes we do. Agreed! 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 And you’re welcome. 🙂
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Great writing, very good.
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Thank you 🙂
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Thank you:)
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The dilemma and the various different problems that you have showcased here is brilliant. Already loving your works.
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You are sooooo good. I wish i could get this good some day. I’ve just started wrtiting, it would be great if youd drop by some suggestions.
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Thank you. I’ll definitely check it out.
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I love this one in particular 👌
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Thanks 😊
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You have a gift, keep writing!
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I can’t express how much I loved it. You have such an amazing talent 😁
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Thank you 🙂
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